I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde postis really good. I especially like the pictures you’ve chosen, it’s made me laugh after seeing a lot of photos where Lorde looks serious or dramatic. The facts you’ve chosen are really informative and your writing is really good, well done Joannie.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Joannie,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Your Lorde postis really good. I especially like the pictures you’ve chosen, it’s made me laugh after seeing a lot of photos where Lorde looks serious or dramatic. The facts you’ve chosen are really informative and your writing is really good, well done Joannie.
I’m really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel