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Friday, 31 July 2020

We should be able to eat food in class.

We should be able to eat food in class because it helps you focus, focusing is good for school because that way you can get more work done helping achieve many goals, without eating starve, making you focus a lot less. Another reason is because it makes you a lot more energetic meaning you could do a lot more working without slacking off/being tired. Studies show that food enhances memory, so during a test a good snack would help. The last reason is because you get more playtime during break times, so you don't have to spend half an hour eating, food is also healthy for your brain. It says when you eat it wakes up your brain. 

2 comments:

  1. Hello Joannie,
    I really like the writing you have done. For next time if you do not already do this look back at your writing to see if you made any mistakes because it says " Without eating starve " but I think you should have wrote " Without eating people can starve "
    - Daisi-Mae

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  2. Hi Joannie,
    I really enjoyed reading your work. I do agree with this piece of writing you have done but next time I think you should check your writing before you publish to see if you made any mistakes.

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