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Thursday, 5 November 2020

Camp

 Next week, I am going to camp and this is how I feel about it. I am feeling nervous but kind of excited I'm only feeling this way, because the stuff my brother said about camp and it was not the best and I take too long to get out of bed at least an hour. I've already got a lot of stuff for camp. I have packed sleeping bag, sunblock, hat, toiletries, water bottle ect.

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  1. Hi Joannie, its me Ryleigh. Im here to comment on your blog!
    I really like how you said what you needed for camp. And also whoever went to camp and didint really know what to bring they could look at this piece of writing.
    i liked how you used your capitals in this piece of writing.
    Maybe you could make the story longer so it doesnt look so empty.
    if you want my blog is at http://pcsryleigha.blogspot.com/

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